There are some very good images in this piece and I like the concept, the overall atmosphere of a religious piece without being pointedly so. However, it is right on the edge of obscure and in some ways a little too “private”, meaning, the reader needs more of a frame of refernce. I like it, but would also like to see a bit more of an anchor in time and place to ground the imagination. Also, typo? “centauries “?
thanks for the good read.