Posted: 21 February 2009 05:13 PM   [ Ignore ]
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Should the ‘little things’ have been stressed more, or are they implied enough?

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Posted: 13 June 2010 11:44 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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The first paragraph starts out well, then you went into a long exposition. It’s all telling and not showing. A flashback of his good times with Whippet would have done a better job.

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Posted: 28 December 2010 12:00 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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Hey SlowNSteady,

Thanks for the comment, much appreciated! Sorry I replied so late, I haven’t been around in a while…

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