Should the ‘little things’ have been stressed more, or are they implied enough?
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Artificial intelligence is no match for natural stupidity.
Editing your stuff: Because an apostrophe is often all that stands between writers who know their shit and writers who know they’re shit.
The first paragraph starts out well, then you went into a long exposition. It’s all telling and not showing. A flashback of his good times with Whippet would have done a better job.
Hey SlowNSteady,
Thanks for the comment, much appreciated! Sorry I replied so late, I haven’t been around in a while…
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