Posted: 18 July 2011 12:22 AM   [ Ignore ]
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Did you sense that something was at stake?

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Posted: 19 July 2011 04:59 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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Ok, sure, I sensed that the relationship between the addressed and the author was at stake, but I was unable to draw much meaning from this poem.  Lots of neat images.  I can’t vote on it yet because I’m afraid I don’t understand it well enough.  Perhaps it is a bit too obscure.

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Posted: 08 June 2012 04:47 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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Some great lines and images indeed.  Same as Dave; if I were to guess, it sound like a woman mad at a man.  But maybe that’s just me.

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