Jpoole,
Again, I really enjoyed this piece. I enjoy your creativity and imagination and the way you’re able to make the impossible come across as matter of fact. This was a fun read, although I found the ending a little rushed and wanting for a little more, um, punch? I’m not sure exactly what it lacked for me, so I’m unfortunately not much help there - maybe a twist or something to balance the novelty and quirkiness of the rest of the story.
- Star
