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I think this poem needs to describe more of “the discussion afterwards”.  It isn’t exactly clear what it was that inspired the “Look, see it there?” - it seems like it might be something important.  I did see the dome and the doorway and the people I assume each had to go in alone… like buttons… but they had to come out too so the next person could go in.  And then they could talk about what they saw.  Maybe at that point, the fitting in isn’t so important any more so you left that part out?  I’m not big on fitting in

Thanks Dave. I didn’t necessarily see them going in one by one like buttons but that makes sense—it was kinda an aside to the poem. That fits the title more appropriately in my opinion.