Posted: 02 March 2008 11:20 AM   [ Ignore ]
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What did you like most?
What was most memorable?

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Posted: 19 March 2008 01:07 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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Well, I’m from Green Bay country here, so I think I will hold off on that for a bit.

I think you have room to make this even more ironic. I would say that right now, it is going in that direction, but I think you can make it even more so by using different adjectives (besides stupid), or doing different things with the word stupid. Here, I am thinking like Lewis Carroll’s Jaberwocky where he made different nonsense words mean different things.

Try it. You might like it. smile

MAYBE it won’t be stupid!

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