Julie…
Interesting. I like how this is all in dialogue. I am not quite sure if I am picking up on all of the symbolism, but that’s cool. I don’t pick up on symbolism a lot and am usually mocked horribly for it.
I know that workshops generally imply that you are in a “cone of silence” or at least, that’s what all of my workshop professors tell me, but I was wondering if you could talk a little bit more about this. What inspired it? What are your symbols? What were you trying to say economically/politically? In other words, what is dumb ass Sarah missing here?
My favorite image: The uncomfortableness of being on the phone with someone when you know they owe you a large amount of money. I feel that.
