Can you embellish your synopsis? I like the writing, but there isn’t enough of it to draw me in. For me a synopsis will tell the whole book, condensing it down to 1% or less of its size by intense summarizing. The excerpt can then remind the reader of that one sentence, paragraph, clause, or even a single word, from the synopsis, showing how the synopsis expands into a great book. I’ll have to cross post that to the FAQ post.