Posted: 03 June 2008 11:08 PM   [ Ignore ]
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Did reading this remind you of someone?
Do you have any suggestions for the author?

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Hell is not a place, it’s a state of mind.  Phantom by Susan Kay

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Posted: 06 June 2008 01:51 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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>>Did reading this remind you of someone?
>>Do you have any suggestions for the author?

Reading this DID remind me of someone.  I venture to say that it would remind anyone of someone, and make them think. 
As for suggestions, I’ll get to those when I am finished being reminded of some one. 

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Julie

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Posted: 06 June 2008 03:25 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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Thank you grin  I’m glad there was an impact….isn’t that the goal of every writer?  Let me know if you come up with any suggestions though, please.  I am very new to this writing business, and could use some direction.

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