Posted: 12 August 2008 03:28 PM   [ Ignore ]
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Did you like the protagonist?

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Posted: 16 November 2008 02:41 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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friend of the night,

I thought your protagonist was very candid. And very true. I really enjoyed (well, I wish I didn’t, but….) really enjoyed the fact that I can totally understand this without even thinking about it. Life has a way of opening your eyes to writing, doesn’t it?

Well done smile

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Editing your stuff: Because an apostrophe is often all that stands between writers who know their shit and writers who know they’re shit.

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