Posted: 22 September 2008 12:19 PM   [ Ignore ]
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What was your favorite image in this piece?

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Posted: 22 September 2008 06:06 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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Licking her fingers ....must have tasted delightful

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Posted: 15 November 2008 02:20 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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LWW,

what a great story! I really enjoyed it smile I love that you’re able to inject so much personality into your characters with simple, well placed words. It makes the reading smooth and full of depth without making it heavy.

Awesome read!

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