Posted: 12 October 2008 05:39 PM   [ Ignore ]
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Could the author provide more “handrails” (is it difficult to follow)?

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Posted: 16 November 2008 01:29 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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Hi Rreed,

I thought this piece was really fun to read. I loved the Jeopardy setting and the humour in your submission. I thought it was fairly easy to follow up until the ‘I went to Australia once’ part. I had to read back and forth a littlel bit to know who was speaking.

Otherwise, great read, I really enjoyed it smile

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