Posted: 18 November 2008 01:36 AM   [ Ignore ]
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Posted: 18 November 2008 11:35 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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Loved it all!

I loved the perp’s comments - Pie for everyone! I should be careful no one hears me…pie..mmm..

Funny, witty, short and sweet. Loved it.

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Posted: 19 November 2008 01:41 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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Thanks for the comments.  They are uplifting.

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Posted: 12 February 2010 08:44 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 3 ]
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This is a funny piece of writing. I like the language and the brevity of it. The scenes were well drawn and highly visual, what more can you ask of a fiece of fiction less than a thousand words.

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Posted: 01 March 2010 11:52 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 4 ]
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Thanks for the kind words, Harris.  Your comment made me smile.

This piece made me laugh, from concept to completion.

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