Did you like the protagonist?

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I did not like the protagonist, and I don’t think the writer intend for the reader to like him.

I did like the protagonist. I think both main characters were funny and endearing in their own way. I felt a bit let down by the ending. Your story built up to what I expected would be an interesting, twisted climax, but then it deflated and I was left hoping for something more. I did enjoy the story up to the end, but I think you could have developed it a bit further to go out with a bang.

I enjoyed your writing style though, and thought the carelessness of your storytelling was refreshing.

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