Posted: 25 January 2011 05:00 PM   [ Ignore ]
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Did you sense that something was at stake?

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Posted: 25 January 2011 05:37 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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I enjoyed reading this. I especially like the smoking mouth.

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Editing your stuff: Because an apostrophe is often all that stands between writers who know their shit and writers who know they’re shit.

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Posted: 26 January 2011 07:03 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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Thanks, I actually wasn’t sure if that bit would work, so I’m glad it has smile

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