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Thursday, November 16, 2006

Bed Time

Category: Short Story
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  • It’s a good story. Congrats! (I think a little editing would improve its language and style.)

    Dr George Karimalil

    Posted by Dr George Karimalil  on  11/21  at  11:56 AM
  • I’m open to any editing suggestions and I am always open to help.

    Glad you enjoyed it.

    Posted by thetraveler  on  11/21  at  01:01 PM
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