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Thursday, June 19, 2008

Consolation

Category: Short Story
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  • Fabulous!  Excellent connection with the main character and the perfect message.  There were a few parts that were a bit confusing (the beginning of paragraphs two and six, where I wasn’t sure who I was reading about), but I think they may have helped build the suspense.  Overall great writing and excellent story!

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  06/20  at  03:08 PM
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