Thursday, October 27, 2005

Good Friends

Category: Poetry/Lyrics
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  • Almost a perfect gem.  That second line needs to conform better.  Three syllables, last one to match the fourth line.  At least for me.  But I am kind of left-brained.  Play with those last words and you might find something my left brain will never forget and quote often wink

    Hey, you might even be able to find a way to show how a good friend’s return has one effect at first, but then as a little time goes by, it changes.  I mean, with a few more stanzas, you could try that.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  10/28  at  01:05 AM
  • I defer to Dave’s technical/literary viewpoint. Straight to the point. I enjoyed the piece.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  11/06  at  04:54 AM
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