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Monday, October 24, 2005

inert motion

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  • I think this needs examples in it.  It might work along side “helpless thought” because that piece provides an event from which to heal - which the reader can imagine himself or herself having been through while sitting alone in a crowded place.

    Some typos:
    “incidence” should be “incidents”
    “Its our solitude” should be “It’s our solitude”
    “completely shatters” should be “completely shatter”
    “At time like these” should be “At times like these”
    “we just need…” should be capitalized.

    I’ve really got to get member-editing going.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  10/25  at  02:21 PM
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