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Thursday, January 11, 2007

Leaves

Category: Poetry/Lyrics
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  • A very powerful thought! Keep it up.

    Posted by Dr George Karimalil  on  01/11  at  12:29 PM
  • Explicit and evocative!

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  01/21  at  05:04 AM
  • I agree with the others.

    Only - the cumbling paper does not fit in with the poem. How should a leaf (and this is the leaf reflecting, is it not?) conjure up the sound of crumbling paper?) Suggestion: just find a good word for the sound of autumn leaves without the comparison with paper, or find another comparison with something that is found in nature.

    Kind regards

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  01/31  at  05:45 PM
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