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Monday, October 24, 2005

Lives ch. 1

Category: Short Story
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  • I absolutely LOVE that device.  I’ve been trying to explain it to people for years.  I mean using the insoluble problem as a way to train the mind to think.

    Anyway, it needs paragraphs.  It was kind of hard to read because there are no… beats is what they’re called in acting.  Rests in music.  Know what I mean?

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  10/24  at  11:01 PM
  • Yeah, it went down pretty raw as far as structure goes.  I need an editor!

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  10/25  at  01:18 AM
  • Ninja,

    You can edit your piece now.  Add paragraphs and I will rank it higher.  If the “Edit your piece” link is not displayed at the bottom, click the permalink.

    Dave.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  11/14  at  05:15 PM
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