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Friday, December 08, 2006

Llew Llaw Gyffes Rest (revised)

Category: Short Story
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  • I like where you went with this, from the humble beginnings of a descriptive vignette to a full-blown short story - I liked this a lot. You developed the characters and story well, it was evenly paced and the ending wasn’t telegraphed, (this is worthy of praise in itself). I’d love to be able to comment on your grammar etc, but I’m pretty useless at that so I’ll leave that sort of thing to those more experienced than me. Thanks for sharing.

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    Posted by Darren  on  12/08  at  12:44 PM
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