Sunday, February 01, 2009

Lost in a sea of rage

Category: Issue 16

My heart broken
As if an angry sea
With its mighty ferociousness
licking like flames
tossed it to and fro

My soul to the wind
As if an angry storm
blew it away
floating somewhere
out in the blue

My body just here
Not sure where to go
or where to turn

Lost in a sea of rage
Tossed about hopelessly
Trying to find the way

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  • I suppose we all have things that can make us feel this way.  I always suspect I’m getting sick when I feel it.  I liked the images of the soul blown out to sea and the waves licking like flames.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  02/02  at  02:20 AM
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