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Thursday, November 17, 2005

My Smile

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  • I’m sad to say I am not infected with joy, though I have a nasty similie that won’t go away…wish I was though.

    Posted by deminizer  on  11/17  at  11:43 AM
  • I am infected the same way, and it was that last line that got me to realize it.  You need some edits though:
    a muscle would be amiss, not a miss.
    You may be thinking I’m (not am) making fun
    ‘cause of my condidition you’ve never heard
    Insert a space between “out,” and “you” in the last line.

    I liked this a lot.  Let me know when the edits are made so I can rank it higher.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  11/17  at  12:34 PM
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