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Thursday, July 10, 2008

THE BAY IT BUZZ

Category: Short Story
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  • This reads like the account of a nightmare that makes you happy to wake up.  [removed]void(0);

    Posted by tobiash  on  07/11  at  10:42 AM
  • I always had a fondness for bumbling aliens. They may be technologically superior but their lack of understanding of the human condition can be humorous.

    Posted by tobiash  on  07/24  at  11:51 AM
  • As much fun as this was, it is difficult to stay in after the first line - the whole letter-switch thing is distracting.  I wonder if an editor, who has a desk full of submissions, will be moved to get past that. 

    Do you think the story can hold it’s own without it?  I think it can. grin

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  12/23  at  11:52 AM
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