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Tuesday, November 01, 2005

The Visit

Category: Short Story
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  • Very nice. You have a nicely developed sense for description that had me picturing this quite well in my mind.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  11/01  at  09:12 PM
  • I really enjoy stories that expose the fact that we do not in fact control what we believe.  So often we are blamed for choosing to believe one thing of another, and so often we lie to ourselves about what we believe.

    I also like the popping out levels to an elegant surprise ending.

    I might have to rank this higher after thinking about it more grin

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  11/02  at  03:35 AM
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