Friday, February 10, 2006

This Real Dream

Category: Poetry/Lyrics Winners, Issue 2

Have you ever felt this way?
A way that makes it seem like tis almost to good,
too good to a point that it’s not real,
well this doesn’t seem real,
this life I live,
is it real or is it fake,
I don’t know what to say,
you ask me everyday,
do you wanna be here?
or do you wanna be away,
everyday I answer,
of course here,
but it makes ya wonder,
do you wanna be here for good?
or only till it goes sour,
it just makes ya think,
maybe its a question for later,
tis maybe just a dream I think,
but every time we kiss,
the dream seems so real,
so real that it is,
it can’t be, no it can’t,
life doesn’t like me like this,
please let me wake up,
or please give me a sign,
tell me this is real,
tell me this life I live is here to stay,
this time it’s here to stay,
no more leaving me behind,
this is the life I want to live.

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  • Leon,

    I’m curious - both of the things you posted seem more like songs than poems.  Are they lyrics or just poetry?

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  02/10  at  04:54 PM
  • this’d be the age-old question….re-worked…is it real?....will it last?....do I want it to?....are you telling me true?....am I telling you true?

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  03/09  at  09:48 PM
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