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Tuesday, December 20, 2005

Water

Category: Short Story
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  • I like your descriptions and it’s a neat idea to transform your love of a person who is gone into the elimination of an irrational hatred.

    Your selection of names cracks me up.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  12/21  at  10:20 PM
  • Sebastian and Gwendolyn - what a nice change - beats Romeo and Julia anytime!

    Excellent idea, as Dave has stated, still this is not a short story, definitely needs pruning. I’ll gladly help if you want me to.

    Keep on writing - you have talent!

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  01/02  at  07:39 AM
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