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Monday, December 12, 2005

What if Dung Beetles Done the Weather Report?

Category: Short Story
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  • LOL. I love it, I’ll be laughing out loud thinking about this over the next few days, I’m sure. It would have been a good addition to the humour category, too, but I’m just glad you posted it. Totally changed the tone of my day. smile

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  12/14  at  05:22 PM
  • That’s a story after my own heart. Lay off the adverbs though. (smiled so sweetly,grinned widely)
    He smiles and asks…
    Jay grinned as he took another spoonfull…
    keep it simple, it flows better.
    “ASStrnomical event”... I laughed out loud.
    Thanks

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  05/05  at  10:00 AM
  • I agree with Winona. This story should be in the humor category, cause after all, it’s pretty funny. I hate to say that because It will be competing against my own stuff, but I can’t live with myself if I’m not honest. Once again, nice job.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  05/15  at  01:14 AM
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