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Monday, October 23, 2006

Wild Alaska

Category: Poetry/Lyrics
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  • I can’t figure out what this means:
    There is a mood bent in place
    that extent to all pining to garner.

    I like the fresh and simple rhythm in here. 

    I’ve put a little effort into understanding some of the more complicated sentences (like the one above), but I didn’t feel successful.  Is this because I haven’t read enough?  Or maybe you just happen to enjoy putting words together in unexpected ways (“Life tops ajar to disclosure.”)?

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  11/08  at  12:44 PM
  • I kinda liked the abrupt phrasing, the oddly but provocatively joined words offering more than simple description of events, but suggesting emotions and conflict that lie beneath the players lines. A bit like Nostradamus, without the prophecy. Well done

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  11/11  at  01:45 PM
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