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Tuesday, November 01, 2005

Zombie Stew: Leave nothing on the field…

Category: Short Story
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  • smile I like this… it’s a terrific addition to the saga with a tiny bit of morality play thrown in for good measure. Your character descriptors are excellent - I don’t know how you get such a good sense of your characters forth in such a short space, but you really do. And of course, I loved the last line.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  11/01  at  09:17 PM
  • I don’t get the “Down with Frazier” line.  It almost seemed like you must have changed his name from Brad Frazier to Brad Fitzsimmons and missed one…?

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  11/02  at  03:56 AM
  • Nah….Just a referance to Howard Cosell’s famous call from the rumble in the jungle…an alliteration to falling as though you’ve been knocked out.

    Posted by deminizer  on  11/02  at  11:16 AM
  • not sure i get the title…and it seems a bit rushed…not a whole lot of build up…i would have liked to seen a little more insight into the main character…i feel like before i can even get a feel of what this charcter is about, he’s suddenly and unexplainably getting eaten by zombies…

    Posted by Bones  on  12/11  at  04:56 PM
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