3 sentence story?
Posted: 01 February 2007 10:11 AM   [ Ignore ]
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Searing bright light.
Unintelligible voices command.
Hands hold me down.

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Posted: 01 February 2007 02:22 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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Six word story:

For Sale: Baby shoes.  Like new.

Excellent assignment Rizwan!  I have to admit that I did not make that 6 word story up.  Making so few words into a good story is very appeaing to me - good exercise and highly entertaining.  Maybe this calls for a “Few Words” category in which posts can be no longer than 20 words.

My patient died from delivery complications.
She was your real mom.
Happy fourth birthday.

Not so great, but I gotta get to work.  Thanks again Rizwan!

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Posted: 02 February 2007 05:41 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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login. litmocracy.logout!
(How about just three words)

It sounds more like a poem than story…....
—Shazeh

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Posted: 02 February 2007 10:04 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 3 ]
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Winter is cold.
Retreat inside.
Here’s some coco.

Yeah, you can tell what season it is in Canada…

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Artificial intelligence is no match for natural stupidity.

Editing your stuff: Because an apostrophe is often all that stands between writers who know their shit and writers who know they’re shit.

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Posted: 05 February 2007 12:48 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 4 ]
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Suckered again:
Introduce, build suspense, climax, then provide a denoument.
That way, you’ve provided closure, if not satisfaction or comfort.

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Posted: 05 February 2007 02:54 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 5 ]
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Soft light lends my stories life.
Bathe your brain in alcohol.
Tonight you will not sleep alone.

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Posted: 06 February 2007 03:35 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 6 ]
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lovers once were we
and of that bond
we are never free

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Posted: 07 February 2007 04:40 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 7 ]
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A man with a monkey.
A pedestrian stood beside.
Bitten by the beast and bled!

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Posted: 07 February 2007 09:47 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 8 ]
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I lie in the dark.  My breath stinks of rotting vegetables.  I don’t want to hear about your love.


(written as a sullen undergraduate, a long time ago, heh heh)

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Posted: 07 February 2007 10:16 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 9 ]
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“There’s nothing for it but to go BACK!” cried Julie, “...and jumped into the rapids!”  [high school]

“Breathe, Julie… Breathe,” laughed Litmocracy. 

[Sorry, this place is too fun.  Without the square brackets, this is exactly 20 words.]

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Posted: 08 February 2007 03:34 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 10 ]
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The package arrived at noon.
Her brain screamed, “HOW?!?!”
He strode toward the door.

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Posted: 08 February 2007 03:52 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 11 ]
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( A sequel to ‘man with a monkey’)

The pedestrian had been bitten by the beast and bled.
He stood beside.
A man with a monkey!

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Posted: 05 September 2009 07:30 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 12 ]
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But then I guess what I think about it won’t influence the weather man a bit. I might as well make myself comfortable, for I can’t do anything.

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Posted: 10 August 2010 05:24 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 13 ]
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A San Antonio man was sentenced to three years in prison Wednesday for his role in a series of bizarre cat mutilations three years ago that garnered national attention.

Jordan Scott Mitchell, 24, pleaded no contest to three counts of animal cruelty in February for the torture and death of three gray tabbies that were found duct taped to a piece of plywood near the Cibolo Creek Trails. Two had slit throats and another had been disemboweled.

Wednesday’s hearing came less than a month after co-defendant Austin George Patterson, 21, was ordered to serve eight years in prison for the same cruelty charges.

During both hearings, the defendants acknowledged a fourth killing in which a cat was doused in gasoline and burned alive while tied to a tree. Both men also cited psychiatric problems that had haunted them since childhood and blamed the other for being a negative influence.

“Frankly, I don’t know how you two found each other,” state District Judge Sid Harle told Mitchell as he announced the sentence. “It might have been the perfect storm.”

Both men seemed to have loving families who tried to get them help, Harle said. But “when the acting out starts to occur at this level, punishment has to happen,” he said.

Mitchell told police he stood by as Patterson coaxed the felines from families who posted ads on Craigslist seeking new homes for their pets, and he accompanied Patterson to Home Depot as they purchased plywood and nails. While Mitchell didn’t participate in the mutilation or killings, he did help duct tape the animals and knew what Patterson was about to do to them, Mitchell said.

The two weren’t so much friends as acquaintances “co-existing in misery,” Mitchell testified Wednesday.

“I didn’t want to be by myself, so I hung around him,” he said. “I believe that with my depression and anxiety, it felt like nothing mattered. With Austin’s anger and unbalanced emotions — I fed off of his anger and it made me more angry.”

Defense attorney Brandon Hudson cited testimony from two psychologists who said Mitchell was a follower and didn’t appear to show sociopathic tendencies. Deferred adjudication probation, he said, would allow for punishment without taking away from the progress Mitchell has made with new anxiety medication. “Nothing should scare us of Jordan,” Hudson said. “His mind is not so broken as to be a threat to society.”

Prosecutor Jason Garrahan asked for a six-year sentence, pointing out that the district attorney’s office has received more than 500 letters from the public expressing disgust for the men’s actions.

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