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I think there are some typos in here (you can’t mean to leave anywhere in a “furry”, .... or can you?)

It seems evocative of things more particular than itself.  Mythical poetry?  I like it. 

It’s good in the sense that one can read it and set one’s own circumstances (mythically) to it. 

Cheers!