Did reading this remind you of something?
What could be edited out to shorten this?

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It reminds me of hip hop lyrics by some very good musicians I know. 
Very nice!!!

This thing keeps popping up for me to rate, due to Dave’s incompetence (heh)
Alright, I’ll rate it again.  Some of the lines in this are fantastic.  That’s it.