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Monday, July 31, 2006

Dark Chocolate

Category: Short Story
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  • I really enjoyed the unique perspective on demonic caffeine addiction. The end came all too soon; especially after such a build up about the end of the world.

    “Not that there was anything about this <u>particular</u> candy bar that was all that <u>particular</u>.”

    Posted by BlakeCory  on  08/01  at  06:29 PM
  • I agree that it ended kind of abruptly.  One of the people that read Brain Juice before I published it mentioned that a lot of my stories end kind of abruptly.  So I’ve been working on denouments.

    Does a post this short need one?  Well it has one anyway grin.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  08/02  at  01:56 AM
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