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Sunday, July 23, 2006

Persistence

Category: Short Story
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  • Well written!  I had a little trouble with the idea of her worthlessness.  Perhaps one of her missiles should break one of his car windows, and her “rage-filled words” should be “drunken rage-filled words.”

    Or perhaps the critical reader should consider the possibility that the author doesn’t care whether or not the character is believably worthless.

    When I took writing classes, I realized that knowing what the author wants to do with or for or to the reader really helps during critiquing.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  07/24  at  01:57 AM
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