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Thursday, October 27, 2005

Impairment

Category: Poetry/Lyrics
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  • This makes me want to read more about the impairment.  I’d like to see some more descriptive comparisons like the rain on the car - to get a better feel for what it’s like.  I was a cognitive science major and we studied all kinds of sensory impairments, so this is kind of interesting to me.

    By the way - “countless pains” makes more sense than “countless pain.”  Other than that, the picky technical stuff looks good.

    Posted by .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)  on  10/27  at  02:00 PM

  • I have a longer version than this somewhere… I’ll try and find it. smile

    Posted by The Teenage Wizard of MSM  on  10/29  at  12:29 AM
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