Thursday, November 17, 2005
My Smile
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I’m sad to say I am not infected with joy, though I have a nasty similie that won’t go away…wish I was though.
Posted by deminizer on 11/17 at 11:43 AM
I am infected the same way, and it was that last line that got me to realize it. You need some edits though:
a muscle would be amiss, not a miss.
You may be thinking I’m (not am) making fun
‘cause of my condidition you’ve never heard
Insert a space between “out,” and “you” in the last line.
I liked this a lot. Let me know when the edits are made so I can rank it higher.
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