I love this short story! I am new to this sight and I must say you are indeed talented. The descriptive intensity relayed the sense of power over what was, and, what will be. I could visualize the transformation. Exquisite!

Thank you… It’s part of a short story called 99 burning (www.99burning.com)...This is the narrator, a.k.a. the devil, who is a business man, who brokers deals making people rich for their soul…I will write one story in it (about a car salesman) & the other 98 hard luck stories. I am going to cull from the forum on my web site so even I don’t know where this story is going yet. Feel free to come & post on my site…In fact, all are invited…I will post a special section in the candle lit cafe on 99 burning…