I like this… it’s a terrific addition to the saga with a tiny bit of morality play thrown in for good measure. Your character descriptors are excellent - I don’t know how you get such a good sense of your characters forth in such a short space, but you really do. And of course, I loved the last line.

I don’t get the “Down with Frazier” line.  It almost seemed like you must have changed his name from Brad Frazier to Brad Fitzsimmons and missed one…?

Nah….Just a referance to Howard Cosell’s famous call from the rumble in the jungle…an alliteration to falling as though you’ve been knocked out.

not sure i get the title…and it seems a bit rushed…not a whole lot of build up…i would have liked to seen a little more insight into the main character…i feel like before i can even get a feel of what this charcter is about, he’s suddenly and unexplainably getting eaten by zombies…