By julianyway on 2012 02 01
This was fun to read and reminded me of various past ambivalencies about going to clubs. I felt sympathetic with Melvin for most of it, but you know, maybe Dana would like to do something wholesome like go camping and play poker, and just hasn’t been asked. Part 2 please?
From the entry 'Melvin's Last Dance'.By Chalice_Divine on 2012 01 31
What a perfect expression of what ails me as well. You might have been reading my private journal before you wrote this:)
You should pm me so we can commiserate together on our bucking brains. Fantastic!
From the entry 'My Creative Stammer'.By Chalice_Divine on 2012 01 31
This is a compelling reminder of destructive attitudes and how much we all suffer from it. I can’t think of a single female I have ever met, including little girls, who do not already know this word too well. Bravo!
From the entry 'The S-Word'.By Chalice_Divine on 2012 01 30
I enjoyed this piece. Excellent imagery and a fine mini-vignette of a personal comparison.
From the entry 'Face'.By Chalice_Divine on 2012 01 30
Thanks
I really like that idea sir! Scalping hmmmm….
He would make a fabulous ear muff:)
From the entry 'Chugger Charlie'.By deminizer on 2012 01 30
Excellent piece. Next time, give into the Irish, swill a beer, and let the Indians scalp the cat while you imbibe.
From the entry 'Chugger Charlie'.By Cora Broomfield on 2012 01 11
Thanks. Personally I like the cigarette ash bit, but I guess it might be out of place compared to all the other imagery, which is all nature-based and less icky!
From the entry 'Face'.By jpoole44 on 2012 01 10
I always feel odd about commenting on poetry, don’t know %#@$! about it. I do know what I like, and like this particular peice. I wasn’t sure about the “cigarette ash” but like I said, WTF do I know about poetry! The description of lips, lovely stuff lady!
From the entry 'Face'.By Cora Broomfield on 2012 01 08
Thanks dude ![]()
By deminizer on 2012 01 07
Fantastic imagery and style Cora. Very impressed with your poetry. Blueberry eyes in a pool of cigarette ash. Certain cure for a hangover!
From the entry 'Face'.







