By tobiash on 2008 07 24

I had trouble with this story. I think Jennifer learns something about selfishness but I’m not sure if it has anything to do with Christmas. I’d also like to hear some suggestions about better ways to conclude the piece.

From the entry 'A CHRISTMAS STORY'.


By tobiash on 2008 07 24

I always had a fondness for bumbling aliens. They may be technologically superior but their lack of understanding of the human condition can be humorous.

From the entry 'THE BAY IT BUZZ'.


By aimee on 2008 07 20

Very intensely, radically, powerfully, AWESOME!!!

From the entry 'Womb'.


By thumpy on 2008 07 19

diggin the beat short story
kinda like my life minus dogs and escaped convicts
LET EM LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!!!!!!!

From the entry 'Bad Short Story Submission'.


By Dave Scotese on 2008 07 12

Can you add a few chapters from the book?

From the entry 'A Felony of Birds'.


By tobiash on 2008 07 11

This reads like the account of a nightmare that makes you happy to wake up.  [removed]void(0);

From the entry 'THE BAY IT BUZZ'.


By deminizer on 2008 07 10

Awesome.

I salute you with a diesel Hail Mary!

From the entry 'BIO-JESUS'.


By deminizer on 2008 07 06

Gotcha Julia, I just got your e-mail forwarded from Dave, didn’t get the first one, I’m going to have you work on page 50-75 of the Alien book.

Don

From the entry 'Puppyhood'.


By julianyway on 2008 07 05

"Want some work?”

I’m still waiting for instructions as to exactly what to work at! 

THANKS.

From the entry 'Puppyhood'.


By deminizer on 2008 07 04

Objective realization of the outside world, recognizing the id has a wholly different view of existence before the realization that there’s a society. Ah, those were the days…

Good job.

Want some work?

From the entry 'Puppyhood'.